Apparently, Glorious is a lot more observant that I originally planned, but a little comment on The Freedom Stone forum about his idiocy adding to Awareness just sealed the deal. Plus, it cuts off a couple episodes of them dancing around their secrets and moves the story forward nicely. Plus, I thought it was funny. Therefore, Glorious acquires a new and interesting personality quirk.
And I got rid of the mouths. They really didn’t add anything for me and they seemed to get in the way. Maybe I’ll try again later.
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